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A song I wrote

Post by Astral Eye on Mon Apr 09, 2012 5:33 am

a song I wrote and felt like posting

Part of me

Laugh at me when I’ve had enough,
Push me back when I try,
Shout about all that useless stuff,
Nike, Adidas never needed ‘em to fly,
It’s just a mask.
It’s just a mask.

Cos

What you saw weren’t the best of me,
It’s what I let you see.
It’s not the real me
It’s the part of me,
That I never wanted to have to be,

What you saw weren’t the best of me,
It’s what I let you see.
It’s not the real me
It’s the part of me,
That I never wanted to have to be,


Teachers they didn’t do nothing,
Just let it slip cos they couldn’t do anything,
Waited for a rescuer,
Then I met her,
May not be tall,
But that’s not all,
Cos

She you saw the best of me,
Past what I let her see.
She looked for the real me
Helped me find me,
So I could be what I wanted to be.

She you saw the best of me,
Past what I let her see.
She looked for the real me
Helped me find me,
So I could be what I wanted to be.

This is the best of me,
Just wanna be free
This is the real me,
And she’s the part of me
That let me be who you can see
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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Dinah on Mon Apr 09, 2012 8:36 am

cool i like it. nicely written. you are good.
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Re: A song I wrote

Post by sinnada on Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:33 pm

i love it. you should write more
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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Guest on Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:33 pm

I like it.
Hope you share more of your work Astral.

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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Astral Eye on Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:29 am

thanks, I love writing songs and poems, and am deflationary gonna post more
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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Guest on Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:26 am

You should check out Necka's forum. Lotsa lovely poem's there.

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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Astral Eye on Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:20 am

ive seen some of her stuff, very good
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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Astral Eye on Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:11 am

I came up with this about a girl in my class.

(to be sung to the tune of "twinkle twinkle little star")

Fuck you, fuck you
stupid whore,
I'll push you through the door,
then throw you into space,
so I don't have to see your fugly face,
so fuck you, fuck you
stupid whore,
I pushed you through the door.


Wink Very Happy lol!
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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Guest on Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:12 am

This girl bullyin' you or somethin'? Gimme her name. lol

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Re: A song I wrote

Post by Astral Eye on Thu Apr 12, 2012 5:38 am

no, she's just generally annoying. She annoys literally everyone
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Find me in the flames

Post by Astral Eye on Sat May 12, 2012 10:31 pm

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.

Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.

Why is this chain around my neck,
I see you as a dancing flame,
Where has all the future gone,
Here I go and here I came.

Only you to light my way,
A willowisp to lure me of the path,
I'm in silence,
But I'm deafened by your laugh.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.

Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.

Got the key I just can't find the lock,
Your that whisper in my head,
I know your gonna be the death of me,
So why do I love this death.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.

Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday
(let it burn
I'm a flame)

No more pain,
I'm born again.
(let it burn,
I'm a flame)

BORN AGAIN
JUST TO DIE-EYI-EYI
(let it burn,
I'm a flame)

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
(cleanse me in the flame)
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.
(time to shed the blame)

Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.
Astral Eye
Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.

Why is this chain around my neck,
I see you as a dancing flame,
Where has all the future gone,
Here I go and here I came.

Only you to light my way,
A willowisp to lure me of the path,
I'm in silence,
But I'm deafened by your laugh.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.

Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.

Got the key I just can't find the lock,
Your that whisper in my head,
I know your gonna be the death of me,
So why do I love this death.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.

Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday
(let it burn
I'm a flame)

No more pain,
I'm born again.
(let it burn,
I'm a flame)

BORN AGAIN
JUST TO DIE-EYI-EYI
(let it burn,
I'm a flame)

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday,
(cleanse me in the flame)
Let it burn,
You'll find me in the flames.
(time to shed the blame)

Cos you don't,
Know me,
And all that I am.

I'll wash away,
The pain of yesterday.
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